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For 2 years now, I have been composing music, recording it on my phone, and maybe send it to my sister for feedback, get no reply and thats it!! I do nothing with my music afterwards. But latelty I decided to publish my works.

Here is one of my original pieces, I would really appreciate your feedback and comments on every aspect of the performance.

https://youtu.be/cptn4AI8yhg

Hey.
Most of it sounds really good.
But at 0:45-0:50 something in the string ensemble doesnt sounds right in my ear.
Do you have the sheet music of the piano part?