Orist - Spare Parts | Buried on youtube

[Orist]

Hello everyone!

I'd like you to hear a piece I made as part of a project I started with a friend, to make a new song/track/piece every week.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oGaIYoBa1OM

If you have any comments on it, please share.
For instance, what does it remind you of?
Does it trigger an image or feeling?
What could be done better/different?
I'd love to hear what you think.

Tim
www.orist.nl
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Orist/144522935615341

[MarkGoodwinPianos]

Very captivating opening 30 seconds
30 seconds onwards develops nicely
Nice relief at 50 seconds

The main theme is very nice.

3:20 is quite emotional. I can "feel" each note.
Beautiful reverb

Perhaps it gets a bit too "chordy" in places but I very much enjoyed listening.

Well done